[C]An ode to warrior cloud

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tired tabby, in front of screen, that humans adore so much.
secret smiles, secret Isles, a cat with swift gentle touch.

click clack
tick tack

keyboard tapping
people napping

the cat enjoying, her paws on the keyboard
much more exciting than sleeping in the cupboard

the night deepens, yet she wants to do more
in case the humans stir, she closes the door.

clickity clack
tickity tack

Like a newborn kit, just start to seeing
A cat
at night
rping.

[Snowstep]

Readability: 9/10
It's pretty easy to read, and the meaning understandable. LOVE the rhymes!

Originality: 10/10
I've never, i repeat, NEVER read anything like this! lol a cat rping? that's so cute! =P and *gasp* for WarriorsCloud? awwwww!!!!!!! btw the style is really cool! ^^

Overall: 95%
I enjoyed the poem very much, and obviously, i think i'm the one who'll enjoy it the MOST! XP well, good job since u took the time that night to write this. =3 and see? you're GOOD at poetry! who says you're bad at it?!

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hmm... *stares at time of my post* 11.08... wow...

aw... THANKS SO MUCH kats! i like NEVER get 95% on my poety works (except in my dreams) hahaha.