[C] Imprisoned

[unknownwriter]

Darkness.
Sheer, blinding, darkness.
Darkness, horrifying darkness.

Silence.
Then, footsteps approaching.
The cage opens,
A sudden flash of light.
A hollow thunk
As the food bowl is thrown before me.
Darkness.
Silence.

Stale food.
Tinny water.
Cold hands grabbing me.
Darkness.
Silence.
Loneliness.

Then, one day.
Light.
Flooding in.
Filling the cell.

Warm hands,
Holding me,
Coddling me.
The smile of a little girl.
I purr.

Now,
Warm hands,
Hold me,
Coddle me,
As I sit by my place
On the rug by the fireplace.
Finally belonging,
Finally,
Home.

[Snowstep]

Readability: 9/10
It was easy to read, though the brokenness is hard to understand.

Originality: 8/10
It's pretty good though it's a little broad. It's not that new but the style is pretty cool.

Overall: 85%
It's interesting, and the brokenness is cool in a way if it's not a little confusing. enjoyed reading it. ^^