(C) Should I Love You?

[Lightningstar]

We all know how supportive I am of HeatherxLion, and I really wanted to write a poem about them! The first stanza is Heatherpaw's view and the second is Lionpaw's (just to clear things up).

Should I Love You?

Golden pelt and golden eyes
Like sunlight on the lake.
Our eyes meet
And my heart skips
Leaving me in rapture
Over you.
Lionpaw...
Should I love you?

Those smoky eyes
Mesmerizing me
Like many times before.
A steady thump
As my heart beats faster
For you.
Heatherpaw...
Should I love you?

[Snowstep]

Readability: 10/10
Simple and easy to read. Organized, neat, and obvious feelings. ^^

Originality: 10/10
Very sweet. =3 I don't see many people writing poems about them, so this was the first.

Overall: 100%
Good job!


~Snowstep