[C]I Had Fun, Kid

[mysteryfaith]

Kind of a bit of a song. I wrote it as a song, so I suppose it's a bit like poetry... eh... It's about Tigerstar's thoughts when he was killed by Scourge.

I should probably let this go
And let my life go
But I know my memories
Will never go down
I should probably walk away
Tail held high like it always is
But do I know the path
I am taking now?

I had fun kid (fun, fun)
I had fun kid (fun, fun)
There's nothing I need
Than to see you bleed
I had fun kid (fun, fun)

Watch my eyes
Feel my touch
Know my name
Do you understand?

I should probably let this flow
Leave my heart forever
I should probably jeer and know
I will return
But my heart's go-go
I have this sudden feeling
I may sink the ship tonight
And fall into my own

I had fun kid (fun, fun)
I had fun kid (fun, fun)
There's nothing I like more
Than to hear a battle roar
I had fun kid (fun, fun)

Watch my breath
Leave my throat
Feel my blood
On your soul
Spill my regret
Share it all around
Guilt is the key
Let. Me. Go.


I had fun kid (fun, fun)
I had fun kid (fun, fun)
Oh, it makes my eyes gleam
When I hear your painful scream (SCREAM!)
I had fun kid (fun, fun)
I had fun kid (fun, fun)
Open me
Turn my heart
My work may be done
But you'll carry on
You'll have fun kids (fun, fun)
You'll have fun kids (fun, fun)
I'll help you rule
You'll be my special tools
You'll have fun kids (fun, fun)
Fun kids (fun, fun)
Fun kids (fun, fun)
Fun kids!

[Snowstep]

Readability: 10/10
No problems that I found. =3

Originality: 10/10
VERY original. I LOVE the song idea!!! It's so cool. =P I've wanted to write a song before (cause I wrote the music) but I could never make up the lyrics to flow. x3 I suck at writing lyrics.

Overall: 100%
Nice!!! Did you create music for this???

[mysteryfaith]

Yeah, I 'spose. I'm a Grade 5 pianist, so I messed about on the piano a bit to find the right tone and stuff xD Unfortunately, I didn't write it down.