Pain [C]

[flower]

xDD My uber-emo poem...

No-one knows
I stare in silence
My face is blank, flat, emotionless
Inside I burn
My mind searches for the truth
While my heart is in denial
I grasp for one last hope
But my fingers close on empty silence
The suffocating darkness of my terror
Closes on my heart's one flame
Obliviated
A flash of searing pain, and then
Nothing
This darkness envelops me
Blotting out the light of hope and reason
A silent scream
A hollow laugh
No-one must know
This pain I feel
As it pushes me over the edge
Into silent desparation
It tears me down
Scraping my raw skin
Eating away at my soul
I am nothing
An empty shell
Hollow and abandoned.

[Snowstep]

Readability: 10/10

Originality: 10/10

Overall: 100%

Oh wow this IS super emo!!!!!!! =O LOVED IT THO!!! i wrote several emo poems myself. xP It's has so much emotion... i could just feel it pulsing out of the poem. Great job on putting those emotions into words.

And i hope that those weren't your actual emotions.... be happy, and live life to its fullest. ^^


~Snowstep