[C] Love

[Lightningstar]

This is another true story in poem form. Hope you like it!

A burning emotion
Deep inside my heart.
Is it love?
Maybe.
Maybe not.
I stare after you
As you walk away,
Your voice echoing over and over
In my ears.
Your sweet voice
That gives me something
To smile about.
What is this feeling?
Maybe it's love.
Yes.
It's love.

[Snowstep]

Readability: 10/10
Perfect. =P

Originality: 8/10
Hm, can't say anything's original about a love poem, but u know what's the part i liked the most? the part about the hesitation, where u didn't know if it was love or not. That, was AWESOME. Very true. I could feel the wonder and mood of that part in the poem. Loved it. ^^

Overall: 90%

Great job!


~Snowstep