[C] I Wish I Had A Cat

[Lightningstar]

This is a true story. =) Enjoy!

I wish I had a cat
To call my very own.
I would pet it, I would feed it,
I would love it to the bone.

If only I could have a cat,
My life would be complete.
I would be so happy,
It would really be a treat.

That would be great
If I could have a cat.
I could set it to work
To kill that nasty rat.

But when I hold a cat,
I feel really sick.
A-a-a-achoo!
Looks like I'm allergic.

[Minty]

I like it, you're a good poet!

[Lightningstar]

Thanks Pouncer. =) We're doing poetry in my writing class, and I'm really enjoying it.

[Snowstep]

Readability: 10/10
Very nice. =3 Neat, and I LOVED the rhyme!

Originality: 10/10
Nice! LOL! The ending was really funny. =P

Overall: 100%
Poetry unit must be fun! I just finished my poetry unit, and got a pretty good mark...... But still low to me, because i spent SO MUCH time on it, and got lower than ppl who didn't use the thesaurus for every word. >.<"


~Snowstep